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    what in the same hell is going on here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mooseman33 View Post
    what in the same hell is going on here.
    Someone forgot their meds I'm guessing

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    Cant say i appreciate poetry. English wasnt my thing at school.

    Its nice hes sharing something hes passionate about though. Keep sharing mate.

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    actually no, please stop posting this. its creepy as shit.

    this isnt a self help board, it is still the lounge.

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    You guys are some real dicks,
    You make me laugh like hell.
    You buncha pricks,
    My God does this thread smell.

    So section me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mooseman33 View Post
    actually no, please stop posting this. its creepy as shit.

    this isnt a self help board, it is still the lounge.
    The Lounge is the perfect place to share art. Anyone got paintings or sculptures?

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    and its the perfect place for me to tell you its creepy ass shit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mooseman33 View Post
    actually no, please stop posting this. its creepy as shit.

    this isnt a self help board, it is still the lounge.
    Maybe we should close marcus' photography thread because he shared his art then perhaps?

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    Quote Originally Posted by hollowedzeus View Post
    Maybe we should close marcus' photography thread because he shared his art then perhaps?
    No one is gonna make him stop. Its just suggestion.

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    And with great yawns and stretchings...
    Amble out for love

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    Quote Originally Posted by hollowedzeus View Post
    Maybe we should close marcus' photography thread because he shared his art then perhaps?
    how can you not see the difference between great pics and norman fuvking bates style writing.

    this guy is nuts and you are young and nice.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mooseman33 View Post
    how can you not see the difference between great pics and norman fuvking bates style writing.

    this guy is nuts and you are young and nice.
    Thanks.

    There is a difference. Photography is a form of art that appeals to a larger demographic.

    Poets are a select few that can truely appreciate each others work. (Not me)

    Its some heavy shit kai lover writes but its something he likes and would like to share. I am in no way suggesting we all act like hes a snowflake but let the guy do his thing in peace

    (Not because im young and nice)

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    he is not a fvcking poet man.
    he is a nut who calls himself that.

    there is no art or anything in what he wrote.
    you cant take a shit and call it art.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kai Lover View Post
    I haven't even gotten started. Tomorrow's poem is "The Final Solution" and it opens with the line: Suicide is the solution to a soul beyond repair
    Suicide is a waste of humanity joke.
    Somewhere is a little girl with cancer, clinging to life that doesn't understand the concept of death but she knows she wants to live.
    Meanwhile some pussy man in his teens or twenties wants to off himself because his puss ran off....

    Yeah I am not the guy you want on the hotline, I will talk you into it.
    I have had a couple folks I knew kill themselves.
    They had one thing in common, they were non hacking vaginas.

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    To stub an oar on a rock where none should be,
    To have it rise with a slounge out of the sea
    Is a thing that happened once (too often) to me.

    But not too often - though enough. I count as gain
    That once I met, on a sea tin-tacked with rain,
    That roomsized monster with a matchbox brain.

    He displaced more than water. He shoggled me
    Centuries back - this decadent townee
    Shook on a wrong branch of his family tree.

    Swish up the dirt and, when it settles, a spring
    Is all the clearer. I saw me, in one fling,
    Emerging from the slime of everything.

    So who's the monster? The thought made me grow pale
    For twenty seconds while, sail after sail,
    The tall fin slid away and then the tail.
    Norman MacCaig


    Biggest load of shite ive ever read but i did my english paper on it so others must think its good

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    Amorous cat, alas
    You too must yowl with your love...
    or even worse, without!

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    Quote Originally Posted by hollowedzeus View Post
    To stub an oar on a rock where none should be,
    To have it rise with a slounge out of the sea
    Is a thing that happened once (too often) to me.

    But not too often - though enough. I count as gain
    That once I met, on a sea tin-tacked with rain,
    That roomsized monster with a matchbox brain.

    He displaced more than water. He shoggled me
    Centuries back - this decadent townee
    Shook on a wrong branch of his family tree.

    Swish up the dirt and, when it settles, a spring
    Is all the clearer. I saw me, in one fling,
    Emerging from the slime of everything.

    So who's the monster? The thought made me grow pale
    For twenty seconds while, sail after sail,
    The tall fin slid away and then the tail.
    Norman MacCaig


    Biggest load of shite ive ever read but i did my english paper on it so others must think its good
    Well at least it fucking rhymes.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mooseman33 View Post
    he is not a fvcking poet man.
    he is a nut who calls himself that.

    there is no art or anything in what he wrote.
    you cant take a shit and call it art.
    I've been writing a poem a day for over a month now, plus I read my poetry to an audience at an Open Mic Night two weeks ago, so yeah I'm a poet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kai Lover View Post
    I've been writing a poem a day for over a month now, plus I read my poetry to an audience at an Open Mic Night two weeks ago, so yeah I'm a poet.
    You're a poet. Look at your feet they'll show it. Longfellows.

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    Once more into the fray
    The greatest fight I will ever know
    To live this day
    Or die this day
    To live or die this day.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obspowerstroke View Post
    Once more into the fray
    The greatest fight I will ever know
    To live this day
    Or die this day
    To live or die this day.
    more of a sonnet than a poem

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kai Lover View Post
    more of a sonnet than a poem
    Yeah I messed it up anyway.
    Its actually:
    Once more into the fray
    The last good fight I will ever know
    To live and die this day

    Tis from the movie "the grey"

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    If you have the self-discipline to diet for a bodybuilding show then you should be writing poetry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kai Lover View Post
    If you have the self-discipline to diet for a bodybuilding show then you should be writing poetry.
    I sleep with women.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Obspowerstroke View Post
    I sleep with women.
    Ok. I laughed out loud on that one.

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    i am not blaming you for posting it. I am kicking myself for reading first 4 lines......now I need a fatty to fvck....

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    Quote Originally Posted by calgarian View Post
    i am not blaming you for posting it. I am kicking myself for reading first 4 lines......now I need a fatty to fvck....
    Which four lines?

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    Doesnt matter, but now I know why you have to "Indulge once a month -- a bottle of wine and 20 cigs " after you face a tough crowd.... Should I send DSM over to make you fell better?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kai Lover View Post
    Holding It In

    Sometimes it might be best
    to hold it in
    Not because now is a bad time,
    but rather because in the future
    you might need to --
    so best to practise now

    That’s the pressure you’re feeling:
    the expanding inner walls
    of a full container.

    According to Émile Clapeyron,
    temperature too will also increase
    as the walls strive to expand
    in line with pressure

    If the pressure continues to increase,
    there are only two possibilities;
    there must be a valve
    for a controlled release
    or else there will be an explosion
    (the former : action,
    the latter : reaction)

    Given the choice, it is always
    better to act than to react
    So in order to do so,
    either prevent the pressure surge
    or develop your release valves.

    Strengthen them but
    most importantly
    keep them lubricated

    Anger occurs in a mammalian mind
    in response to violation --
    the blatant happening of the unhappenable.
    That’s the pressure increase you’re feeling
    oh and the heat too.

    You now have the choice to react or to act

    Go on, hit her
    Wtf?
    So the world causes stress so beat your wife/gf as a release???

    Thats what I got from that.

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    You threw your SO about and assumed she knew it was for shits and giggles?

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    There is no way you should take any steroids .

    You are nowhere near stable enough for steroids.
    And for the love of god, stop with what you call poetry, and I call creepy shit.

    Possibly could of caused my nightmares last night.
    Like episode of criminal minds.

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