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    poetic justice

    hey brothers,
    ran across this little rhyme, and thought it might fit well here........


    ODE TO A BODYBUILDER

    we push we pull we sweat we strain,
    you'd think we dont have half a brain.
    we keep lifting all along,
    we think its gonna make us strong.

    the weights we lift are big and round,
    they are quite heavy pound for pound.
    some are vinyl some are steel,
    weight is weight, thats how i feel.

    we bench we curl we press we squat,
    and counting reps, thats quite a lot.
    we do four sets, or five instead,
    and when we're through, we're almost dead.

    we get much pleasure from the pain,
    which comes along with sweat and strain.
    just why we suffer most dont know,
    we build up strength from head to toe.

    the couch potatoes watch us dyin,
    pumpin all that gruesome iron.
    but while they loaf and get quite round,
    we add that muscle, pound for pound...........


    from jimbos gym.


    peace bb79

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    haha kewl poem

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    It's true, but a little more thought could have gone into it. My english teacher would have gave me a.... D at most. All poems don't have to rhyme ya know.

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    Originally posted by Bigk
    It's true, but a little more thought could have gone into it. My english teacher would have gave me a.... D at most. All poems don't have to rhyme ya know.
    Really? Your English teacher would have GIVEN you a D for the poem?

    Nice one, bb79--Thanks for sharing with us.

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    Nice poem

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    Good poem man!

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    Nice poem.

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    Originally posted by Bigk
    It's true, but a little more thought could have gone into it. My english teacher would have gave me a.... D at most. All poems don't have to rhyme ya know.
    who the hell gives a shit about the format of the poem.. point being it's a good poem.

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    HAHAHA

    Good pickup Bask8kase

    And nice poem there barbells79

    Jaguar

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    Thanks for the poem.

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    Originally posted by Bigk
    It's true, but a little more thought could have gone into it. My english teacher would have gave me a.... D at most. All poems don't have to rhyme ya know.

    ok bro,
    1st off, this one isnt mine. that being said, i happened to like it and thought i'd share.
    i didnt know i'd be critiqued on format........


    nice catch there bask.......we can see why he really would have gotten the "D" now........

    peace bb79

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    Originally posted by BASK8KACE


    Really? Your English teacher would have GIVEN you a D for the poem?



    Good poem BB

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