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  1. 04-13-2005, 10:13 PM #1
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    My poem for School

    Journey to a Black Hole


    I was walking across the stars
    When I came across the strange planet of mars
    Whose little people fed me little bars
    So that I could truly see the beautiful stars

    The light was so bright, so bright
    That it made my eyes so tight, so tight
    As I stood there with a look of fright
    All of the little people began to fight

    I saw an aimed gun, so I decided to run
    But all of a sudden, I was part of the sun
    Thinking to myself, this is so much fun
    Until I saw the red and blue lights, then my journey was done.
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  2. 04-13-2005, 10:18 PM #2
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    Hahahhaa its good I guess, I don't know how to critique poetry
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  3. 04-13-2005, 10:19 PM #3
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    Quote Originally Posted by araminside
    Journey to a Black Hole


    I was walking across the stars
    When I came across the strange planet of mars
    Whose little people fed me little bars
    So that I could truly see the beautiful stars

    The light was so bright, so bright
    That it made my eyes so tight, so tight
    As I stood there with a look of fright
    All of the little people began to fight

    I saw an aimed gun, so I decided to run
    But all of a sudden, I was part of the sun
    Thinking to myself, this is so much fun
    Until I saw the red and blue lights, then my journey was done.


    And this is the way your last acid trip ended up ?
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  4. 04-13-2005, 10:28 PM #4
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    you got it
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  5. 04-13-2005, 10:29 PM #5
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  6. 04-14-2005, 03:48 AM #6
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  7. 04-14-2005, 09:20 AM #7
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    Put that to music and you have a Pink Floyd song!
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  8. 04-14-2005, 09:21 AM #8
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    Pretty good man
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  9. 04-14-2005, 09:54 AM #9
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    well it s official - u will flunk
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  10. 04-14-2005, 10:01 AM #10
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    Are you at least good at math?
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  11. 04-14-2005, 10:09 AM #11
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    ...and they say the arts are dead.
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  12. 04-14-2005, 11:09 AM #12
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    im a god **** **** genius in everything except math english history science and literature
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  13. 04-14-2005, 12:13 PM #13
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    Quote Originally Posted by araminside
    im a god **** **** genius in everything except math english history science and literature

    Sounds like you have phys ed down pat!
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  14. 04-14-2005, 12:21 PM #14
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    i change my vote... no literature lounge for AR
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  15. 04-17-2005, 08:20 AM #15
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