selling car advice?

[Foskamink]

ok well i dont know what im missing and need to include in my advertisement, right now this is just being advertised on the local swiss myspace and car websites, so its not very professional or well done, but this is the rough copy. tell me what to change and add if you feel the need, thanks







hello, im selling a 2006, black sedan, subaru WRX impreza 2.5L Turbo.

purchased april 2006. from emil frey zurich ch, current location is geneva.
17,000km on the clock right now.

5 speed Manual, black, sedan
240hp turbo charged 4 cyc engine. 0-100km in roughly 5-5.5 seconds
the car has just had its 2nd service. one owner/driver
clutch was replaced after 10,000 km due to driver prefrence.



has alot of extra upgrades,

tyres
car currently has a 4 winter tyres on it, that has done roughly 5,000km (mostly highway, not much wear)
the car also has its original rims, the summer tyres, 3 are bald and unroadworthy and one is falt.

luxury
black leather interia, Sunroof, set of 4 sti car mats, bluetooth/hands free for mobile phone, seat warmers, rear parking censors, new gear knob + pedals (original was cheap looking)


offical subaru sejmse5000, exhaust upgrade - with ECC approval registerd papers.
the exhaust is full, 2.5 inch wide, this exhaust adds grunt to the car, and increasing HP, the car will sound louder and better then any other subaru stock, including all the new STI editions.
car comes with original exhaust system, which has done 0km and sitting arround handy anytime needed or ready to be sold.

the front and back body kit, on the right side, has been cracked. from idiots in carparks who cant park properly and did not leave a note, the back bodykit, will ro8ughly be 1000chf to replace, the front has not been quoted yet, but i expect the same price, the body kit can be reattached for a extremly lower price, body kit dose not need to be replaced, but can be on personal choice.

if i can think of anything i forgot i will add it in later, or if any questions just say so

reason for sale is, i have just purchased a motobike, and no longer can afford to provide petrol for both.

the car was on the road at roughly 55,000 CHF, looking for a reasonable offer.
for its current condition, or condition once bodykit fixed.
can get a test drive for people with propper interest.

here is a bunch of pictures.

http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4199/dsc00679pj3.jpg
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[gixxerboy1]

Honestly that's the worst car ad i have ever read. Do not use that,

[Foskamink]

im not using that, just need to know what information to put in. any one got a structure i should be using, kinda hard to make a add look decent when ya just listing everything in order as it comes to your mind while your typing.

[Foskamink]

oh and this is just for the myspace group with a few thousand swiss members, and the subaru wrx club, so dosnt have to be perfect but i agree it needs to look better

[Snrf]

clutch was replaced after 10,000 km due to driver prefrence.

hahaha, more like you were learning to drive and burnt the clutch out in 10 thousand km probably!

[Foskamink]

well to tell the truth, no i wasnt learning to drive, i was just dumping the clutch at 6000rpm too much from first to 2nd, and i was powering off the start at lights for no reason with the clutch keepin the revs up, i was sensible for the first 5000km changing at 3-4k rpm, let the engine wear in nicely, then i just thrashd it to 10,000km then i just drive like a grandma, dont use the power anymore, only on the highway and you dont even need power to go fast. but yeh i just dump clutch at 6k rpm alot and too much power clutching, adding a few burnouts it dosnt help the car.

[gixxerboy1]

im not using that, just need to know what information to put in. any one got a structure i should be using, kinda hard to make a add look decent when ya just listing everything in order as it comes to your mind while your typing.

Not so much what info to put in but what to take out. The car sounds beat to shit.

Look how it sounds. It has 17000km on it. You list the 0-60 time and say a new clutch so apparently you into going fast. The summer tires are bald and the body kit is damaged. I wouldn't even call if i saw that stuff listed.

[Foskamink]

haha yeh, the summer tyres are bald after 12,000km cause i drive it pretty hard all the time usually, body kit damage is from carpark at shopping center, yeh 0-60 time dosnt need to be said, new clutch is ment to be appealing to some, but hard to be appealing without making the car sound treated bad, 17,000km is pretty low, but alot considering the time i have had it, maybe i should just wait and claim insurance get the body kit replaced dirt cheap and sell it then, take a look at the pictures please!

[Snrf]

Pay me £500 and I'll disappear it for you, nice insurance job you'll probably get more from the Insurance co. than you would selling it

[Kale]

First thing is you dont tell people what is wrong with the car. If I saw that add I would think that you were a young hoon and you had been thrashing the shit out of it.