100 word essay for the PD

**unclemoney** · 05-29-2007, 11:20 PM

I have to describe in 100 words or less why I want to be employed... I really suck at these kind of things... Any1 wana give me some key points to focus on???

**Foskamink** · 05-30-2007, 01:47 AM

PD = police ***artment right

**InsaneInTheMembrane** · 05-30-2007, 02:29 AM

I know these points are generic, but you can put your own spin to it:

-Giving back to the community that made "me" who "I" am today
-"I" have seen a lot of injustice growing up (give examples).
-20 years from now, "I" want my kids/grandkids to have a good role model and a strong sense of community and ethics

cheers

**TR'05** · 05-30-2007, 07:23 AM

Oh so much b.s. is possible for this shit...grad school applications always have things like this. How bout this:

"I have been privileged to grow up in a society with rights and liberties that any person should be entitled to. I knowy I have the skill set to perform, and excel, in the police ***tartment; but, furthermore, I have the desire to give back to my municipality, state, and country. By enforcing the law I will be able to do the abovementioned, as a selfless civil servant."

Might be a bit under 100. looks about 75ish.

**xlxBigSexyxlx** · 05-30-2007, 07:33 AM

Brag about yourself. Tell them why your the man for the job, but you gotta live up to it lol.

**Pooks** · 05-30-2007, 07:47 AM

They prolly just want to see if you can form sentences.

**WEBB** · 05-30-2007, 08:02 AM

Originally Posted by TR'05

Oh so much b.s. is possible for this shit...grad school applications always have things like this. How bout this:

"I have been privileged to grow up in a society with rights and liberties that any person should be entitled to. I knowy I have the skill set to perform, and excel, in the police ***tartment; but, furthermore, I have the desire to give back to my municipality, state, and country. By enforcing the law I will be able to do the abovementioned, as a selfless civil servant."

Might be a bit under 100. looks about 75ish.

I like this one....very well worded and gets the point across....

**Foskamink** · 05-30-2007, 12:01 PM

tell them how much you can bench press, and how you hate people curling in the squat rack, dont forget you can drink winny?

**QuieTSToRM33** · 05-30-2007, 03:15 PM

Originally Posted by Foskamink

tell them how much you can bench press, and how you hate people curling in the squat rack, dont forget you can drink winny?

Grow the fvck up already !

Enough with your bullshit.

**QuieTSToRM33** · 05-30-2007, 03:18 PM

Originally Posted by TR'05

"I have been privileged to grow up in a society with rights and liberties that any person should be entitled to. I know I have the skill set to perform, and excel, in the police d epartment; but, furthermore, I have the desire to give back to my municipality, state, and country. By enforcing the law I will be able to do the aforementioned, as a selfless civil servant."

That's beautiful. I touched it up a bit for ya though.

**TR'05** · 05-30-2007, 03:23 PM

^^Thanks bro! Thought I'd leave the editing up to the thread starter.

Looks like the work is pretty much done now.

**Huckster** · 05-30-2007, 04:16 PM

Originally Posted by QuieTSToRM33

Grow the fvck up already !

Enough with your bullshit.

**QuieTSToRM33** · 05-30-2007, 06:55 PM

Originally Posted by Huckster

I'm sorry ... who are you ?

**unclemoney** · 05-31-2007, 03:39 AM

Thanks, ill use this stuff. just got back from gym//friends house lol a tad bit late... Will def work on this tomorrow though when I get back from work. Procrastination at it's best, the essay is due on friday when I take the polygraph. Along with a huge packet that's only half way filled out