100 word essay for the PD

[unclemoney]

I have to describe in 100 words or less why I want to be employed... I really suck at these kind of things... Any1 wana give me some key points to focus on???

[Foskamink]

PD = police ***artment right

[InsaneInTheMembrane]

I know these points are generic, but you can put your own spin to it:

-Giving back to the community that made "me" who "I" am today
-"I" have seen a lot of injustice growing up (give examples).
-20 years from now, "I" want my kids/grandkids to have a good role model and a strong sense of community and ethics

cheers

[TR'05]

Oh so much b.s. is possible for this shit...grad school applications always have things like this. How bout this:

"I have been privileged to grow up in a society with rights and liberties that any person should be entitled to. I knowy I have the skill set to perform, and excel, in the police ***tartment; but, furthermore, I have the desire to give back to my municipality, state, and country. By enforcing the law I will be able to do the abovementioned, as a selfless civil servant."

Might be a bit under 100. looks about 75ish.

[xlxBigSexyxlx]

Brag about yourself. Tell them why your the man for the job, but you gotta live up to it lol.

[Pooks]

They prolly just want to see if you can form sentences.

[WEBB]

Oh so much b.s. is possible for this shit...grad school applications always have things like this. How bout this:

"I have been privileged to grow up in a society with rights and liberties that any person should be entitled to. I knowy I have the skill set to perform, and excel, in the police ***tartment; but, furthermore, I have the desire to give back to my municipality, state, and country. By enforcing the law I will be able to do the abovementioned, as a selfless civil servant."

Might be a bit under 100. looks about 75ish.

I like this one....very well worded and gets the point across....

[Foskamink]

tell them how much you can bench press, and how you hate people curling in the squat rack, dont forget you can drink winny?

[QuieTSToRM33]

tell them how much you can bench press, and how you hate people curling in the squat rack, dont forget you can drink winny?

Grow the fvck up already !

Enough with your bullshit.

[QuieTSToRM33]

"I have been privileged to grow up in a society with rights and liberties that any person should be entitled to. I know I have the skill set to perform, and excel, in the police d epartment; but, furthermore, I have the desire to give back to my municipality, state, and country. By enforcing the law I will be able to do the aforementioned, as a selfless civil servant."

That's beautiful. I touched it up a bit for ya though.

[TR'05]

^^Thanks bro! Thought I'd leave the editing up to the thread starter.

Looks like the work is pretty much done now.

[Huckster]

Grow the fvck up already !

Enough with your bullshit.

[QuieTSToRM33]

I'm sorry ... who are you ?

[unclemoney]

Thanks, ill use this stuff. just got back from gym//friends house lol a tad bit late... Will def work on this tomorrow though when I get back from work. Procrastination at it's best, the essay is due on friday when I take the polygraph. Along with a huge packet that's only half way filled out