Poem Thread

Don't know if any of you guys like poetry I like to write in my spare time.
If you do too lets see what you got :)

Now I lay me down to sleep

I pray to God I do not wake

My life has been a big mistake

I want to die it is my choice

Perhaps in death I will rejoice




Pain and sorrow is all I know

Day by day it continues to grow

Friends and family are not around

Which is why I wish to be in the ground

You told me you loved me which was a lie

Which is now why I must die




I now say my good by to you

I wish you good through and through

I hope you have a happy life

Oh P.S sorry I ****ed your wife

Write a poem about tren ace

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Originally Posted by Skinticket

Now I lay me down to sleep I pray to God I do not wake My life has been a big mistake I want to die it is my choice Perhaps in death I will rejoice Pain and sorrow is all I know Day by day it continues to grow Friends and family are not around Which is why I wish to be in the ground You told me you loved me which was a lie Which is now why I must die I now say my good by to you I wish you good through and through I hope you have a happy life Oh P.S sorry I ****ed your wife

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That's depressing. Maybe something more upbeat, inspirational.

Haha, I've never taken tren but I will do my best

here is a video I made a while back
https://youtu.be/v3Mnix6AKKo

okay GirlyGymRat I will work on something for you.

My mind is a twisted orb of thoughts and memories..

Hurt pain sorrow despair

My love, you give me your word

but yet choose another path

and I again parish within the dust




I am now just a broken soul

searching for what has meaning

but the fight is nearing the end

all love has gone, only hate remains




shall I choose hate and remain

or love and have ever lasting peace..

I now lay down thy sword and thy armor

enough blood has been swept across this land.




Let the dead return from which they came,

and the angels regain their wings,

and the lost souls find their way

Roses are a flower
Violets are too
I suck at poetry
Nice Tits!

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Originally Posted by RigPig

Roses are a flower
Violets are too
I suck at poetry
Nice Tits!

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Art Critic Hoggage says.... A masterpiece of art right here.

The roses and violets represent repressed emotions.

The lack of structure to the poem are a reflection of the time this poem was written, a time when more and more people lacked these in their lives.

The artist is clearly suffering from depression, an unfortunate illness caused by his incredible genius, when he wrote the words "I suck at poetry".

The reference to female breasts represents his unconscious lust for his own mother.

If you do not understand what I mean by all of this, or disagree of my assessment of the artist, it's because you do not understand what true art is.

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Originally Posted by Hoggage_54

Art Critic Hoggage says.... A masterpiece of art right here. The roses and violets represent repressed emotions. The lack of structure to the poem are a reflection of the time this poem was written, a time when more and more people lacked these in their lives. The artist is clearly suffering from depression, an unfortunate illness caused by his incredible genius, when he wrote the words "I suck at poetry". The reference to female breasts represents his unconscious lust for his own mother. If you do not understand what I mean by all of this, or disagree of my assessment of the artist, it's because you do not understand what true art is.

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Finally someone that gets me lol... My work here is done hahaha

**except the mother part...That's f**ked up lol

awsome