My Poetry

[Kai Lover]

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[Kai Lover]

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[Kai Lover]

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[Mooseman33]

what in the same hell is going on here.

[Cuz]

what in the same hell is going on here.

Someone forgot their meds I'm guessing

[hollowedzeus]

Cant say i appreciate poetry. English wasnt my thing at school.

Its nice hes sharing something hes passionate about though. Keep sharing mate.

[Mooseman33]

actually no, please stop posting this. its creepy as shit.

this isnt a self help board, it is still the lounge.

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You guys are some real dicks,
You make me laugh like hell.
You buncha pricks,
My God does this thread smell.

So section me.

[Kai Lover]

actually no, please stop posting this. its creepy as shit.

this isnt a self help board, it is still the lounge.

The Lounge is the perfect place to share art. Anyone got paintings or sculptures?

[Mooseman33]

and its the perfect place for me to tell you its creepy ass shit.

[hollowedzeus]

actually no, please stop posting this. its creepy as shit.

this isnt a self help board, it is still the lounge.

Maybe we should close marcus' photography thread because he shared his art then perhaps?

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Maybe we should close marcus' photography thread because he shared his art then perhaps?

No one is gonna make him stop. Its just suggestion.

[Capebuffalo]

Arise from sleep, old cat,
And with great yawns and stretchings...
Amble out for love

[Mooseman33]

Maybe we should close marcus' photography thread because he shared his art then perhaps?

how can you not see the difference between great pics and norman fuvking bates style writing.

this guy is nuts and you are young and nice.

[Kai Lover]

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[hollowedzeus]

how can you not see the difference between great pics and norman fuvking bates style writing.

this guy is nuts and you are young and nice.

Thanks.

There is a difference. Photography is a form of art that appeals to a larger demographic.

Poets are a select few that can truely appreciate each others work. (Not me)

Its some heavy shit kai lover writes but its something he likes and would like to share. I am in no way suggesting we all act like hes a snowflake but let the guy do his thing in peace

(Not because im young and nice)

[Mooseman33]

he is not a fvcking poet man.
he is a nut who calls himself that.

there is no art or anything in what he wrote.
you cant take a shit and call it art.

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I haven't even gotten started. Tomorrow's poem is "The Final Solution" and it opens with the line: Suicide is the solution to a soul beyond repair

Suicide is a waste of humanity joke.
Somewhere is a little girl with cancer, clinging to life that doesn't understand the concept of death but she knows she wants to live.
Meanwhile some pussy man in his teens or twenties wants to off himself because his puss ran off....

Yeah I am not the guy you want on the hotline, I will talk you into it.
I have had a couple folks I knew kill themselves.
They had one thing in common, they were non hacking vaginas.

[hollowedzeus]

To stub an oar on a rock where none should be,
To have it rise with a slounge out of the sea
Is a thing that happened once (too often) to me.

But not too often - though enough. I count as gain
That once I met, on a sea tin-tacked with rain,
That roomsized monster with a matchbox brain.

He displaced more than water. He shoggled me
Centuries back - this decadent townee
Shook on a wrong branch of his family tree.

Swish up the dirt and, when it settles, a spring
Is all the clearer. I saw me, in one fling,
Emerging from the slime of everything.

So who's the monster? The thought made me grow pale
For twenty seconds while, sail after sail,
The tall fin slid away and then the tail.
Norman MacCaig


Biggest load of shite ive ever read but i did my english paper on it so others must think its good

[Capebuffalo]

Amorous cat, alas
You too must yowl with your love...
or even worse, without!

[Capebuffalo]

To stub an oar on a rock where none should be,
To have it rise with a slounge out of the sea
Is a thing that happened once (too often) to me.

But not too often - though enough. I count as gain
That once I met, on a sea tin-tacked with rain,
That roomsized monster with a matchbox brain.

He displaced more than water. He shoggled me
Centuries back - this decadent townee
Shook on a wrong branch of his family tree.

Swish up the dirt and, when it settles, a spring
Is all the clearer. I saw me, in one fling,
Emerging from the slime of everything.

So who's the monster? The thought made me grow pale
For twenty seconds while, sail after sail,
The tall fin slid away and then the tail.
Norman MacCaig


Biggest load of shite ive ever read but i did my english paper on it so others must think its good

Well at least it fucking rhymes.

[Kai Lover]

he is not a fvcking poet man.
he is a nut who calls himself that.

there is no art or anything in what he wrote.
you cant take a shit and call it art.

I've been writing a poem a day for over a month now, plus I read my poetry to an audience at an Open Mic Night two weeks ago, so yeah I'm a poet.

[Capebuffalo]

I've been writing a poem a day for over a month now, plus I read my poetry to an audience at an Open Mic Night two weeks ago, so yeah I'm a poet.

You're a poet. Look at your feet they'll show it. Longfellows.

[Kai Lover]

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Once more into the fray
The greatest fight I will ever know
To live this day
Or die this day
To live or die this day.

[Kai Lover]

Once more into the fray
The greatest fight I will ever know
To live this day
Or die this day
To live or die this day.

more of a sonnet than a poem

[Obs]

more of a sonnet than a poem

Yeah I messed it up anyway.
Its actually:
Once more into the fray
The last good fight I will ever know
To live and die this day

Tis from the movie "the grey"

[Kai Lover]

If you have the self-discipline to diet for a bodybuilding show then you should be writing poetry.

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If you have the self-discipline to diet for a bodybuilding show then you should be writing poetry.

I sleep with women.

[Capebuffalo]

I sleep with women.

Ok. I laughed out loud on that one.

[Kai Lover]

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[calgarian]

i am not blaming you for posting it. I am kicking myself for reading first 4 lines......now I need a fatty to fvck....

[Kai Lover]

i am not blaming you for posting it. I am kicking myself for reading first 4 lines......now I need a fatty to fvck....

Which four lines?

[calgarian]

Doesnt matter, but now I know why you have to "Indulge once a month -- a bottle of wine and 20 cigs " after you face a tough crowd.... Should I send DSM over to make you fell better?

[Kai Lover]

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Holding It In

Sometimes it might be best
to hold it in
Not because now is a bad time,
but rather because in the future
you might need to --
so best to practise now

That’s the pressure you’re feeling:
the expanding inner walls
of a full container.

According to Émile Clapeyron,
temperature too will also increase
as the walls strive to expand
in line with pressure

If the pressure continues to increase,
there are only two possibilities;
there must be a valve
for a controlled release
or else there will be an explosion
(the former : action,
the latter : reaction)

Given the choice, it is always
better to act than to react
So in order to do so,
either prevent the pressure surge
or develop your release valves.

Strengthen them but
most importantly
keep them lubricated

Anger occurs in a mammalian mind
in response to violation --
the blatant happening of the unhappenable.
That’s the pressure increase you’re feeling
oh and the heat too.

You now have the choice to react or to act

Go on, hit her

Wtf?
So the world causes stress so beat your wife/gf as a release???

Thats what I got from that.

[Kai Lover]

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[hollowedzeus]

You threw your SO about and assumed she knew it was for shits and giggles?

[Mooseman33]

There is no way you should take any steroids .

You are nowhere near stable enough for steroids.
And for the love of god, stop with what you call poetry, and I call creepy shit.

Possibly could of caused my nightmares last night.
Like episode of criminal minds.

[Kai Lover]

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