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    Please critique my

    I wanted to post my 'refined' diet for critique. I know it's not perfect yet, but it's a work in progress, and hopefully it will be better than previously (right twist? =). Here it goes:

    Meal 1 (pre-workout) 4:45am
    2 hard boiled eggs - 12g protein, 10g fat
    1 Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein
    1 piece wheat toast, dry - 15g carbs

    Total: 42g protein, 15g carbs, 10g fat - 360cals

    5:45am - 7:15am - Workout and cardio

    Meal 2 (post-workout) 7:15am
    Whey Protein Shake in Skim Milk - 32g protein, 14g carbs
    Fat Free Yogurt - 5g protein, 20g carbs
    1/2 cup fat free cottage cheese w/ pineapple - 11g protein, 15g carbs

    Totals: 48g protein, 49g carbs - 400cals

    Meal 3 - 10:15am
    8oz ground turkey, 48g protein, 16g fat

    Totals: 48g protein, 16g fat - 350cals

    Meal 4 -1:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    1/2 cup cubed avacado - 10g fat, 6g carbs

    Totals: 48g protein, 10g fat, 300cals (not counting carbs, all fiber)


    Meal 5 - 4:15pm
    8oz ground turkey - 48g protein

    Totals: 48g protein, 200cals

    Meal 6 - 7:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    Fibrous veggies (broccoli, asparagus, etc.) or small salad

    Totals: 48g protein, minimal carbs (mostly fiber), 300cals

    Meal 7 (bedtime) 10:00pm
    Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein, 5g carbs

    Totals: 30g protein, 5g carbs, 220 cals

    So i'm roughly at 2200 cals/day, eating every 3 hours, getting 300+ grams of protein per day, i've reduced carbs considerably and replaced with good fats, and have cut down by 1/2 on the protein shakes and replaced with real food. How does this look? Please help me refine further!
    Last edited by gbrice75; 12-07-2009 at 06:47 AM. Reason: Accidently hit 'post'. Sorry about the title too!

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    Stats? I assume your goal is cutting.
    I don't understand macros of meal 3 and 5.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klimax View Post
    Stats? I assume your goal is cutting.
    I don't understand macros of meal 3 and 5.
    Sorry, I initially posted this as an update to my original post, but figured i'd start over here:

    5'11
    195lbs
    34 years old
    Not sure about bodyfat %, but an educated guess is somewhere around 20%
    I will be posting pics ASAP
    Short Term Goal: 200lbs, 10% (or lower) bodyfat

    Meals 3 and 5 are identical although I forgot to add the fat into meal 5. With 16 grams of fat per 8oz of ground turkey, I saw no need for any additional calories here. What do you think?

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    5'11
    195lbs
    34 years old
    Not sure about bodyfat %, but an educated guess is somewhere around 20%
    I will be posting pics ASAP
    Short Term Goal: 200lbs, 10% (or lower) bodyfat

    Meals 3 and 5 are identical although I forgot to add the fat into meal 5. With 16 grams of fat per 8oz of ground turkey, I saw no need for any additional calories here. What do you think?

    Meal 1 (pre-workout) 4:45am
    2 hard boiled eggs - 12g protein, 10g fat
    1 Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein
    1 piece wheat toast, dry - 15g carbs

    Total: 42g protein, 15g carbs, 10g fat - 360cals

    5:45am - 7:15am - Workout and cardio

    Meal 2 (post-workout) 7:15am
    Whey Protein Shake in Skim Milk - 32g protein, 14g carbs
    Fat Free Yogurt - 5g protein, 20g carbs
    1/2 cup fat free cottage cheese w/ pineapple - 11g protein, 15g carbs

    Totals: 48g protein, 49g carbs - 400cals

    Meal 3 - 10:15am
    8oz ground turkey, 48g protein, 16g fat

    Totals: 48g protein, 16g fat - 350cals

    Meal 4 -1:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    1/2 cup cubed avacado - 10g fat, 6g carbs

    Totals: 48g protein, 10g fat, 300cals (not counting carbs, all fiber)


    Meal 5 - 4:15pm
    8oz ground turkey - 48g protein

    Totals: 48g protein, 200cals

    Meal 6 - 7:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    Fibrous veggies (broccoli, asparagus, etc.) or small salad

    Totals: 48g protein, minimal carbs (mostly fiber), 300cals

    Meal 7 (bedtime) 10:00pm
    Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein, 5g carbs

    Totals: 30g protein, 5g carbs, 220 cals

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    Quote Originally Posted by Twist View Post
    5'11
    195lbs
    34 years old
    Not sure about bodyfat %, but an educated guess is somewhere around 20%
    I will be posting pics ASAP
    ****ok sounds good
    Short Term Goal: 200lbs, 10% (or lower) bodyfat
    ****that's going to involve a cut (now) and a bulk (later)

    Meals 3 and 5 are identical although I forgot to add the fat into meal 5. With 16 grams of fat per 8oz of ground turkey, I saw no need for any additional calories here. What do you think?

    Meal 1 (pre-workout) 4:45am
    2 hard boiled eggs - 12g protein, 10g fat
    1 Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein
    1 piece wheat toast, dry - 15g carbs
    Total: 42g protein, 15g carbs, 10g fat - 360cals
    ****more eggs, whole eggs, drop the toast. I think whether or not you have carbs in this meal depends on your bf and muscle mass. Pic would be easier.

    5:45am - 7:15am - Workout and cardio
    ****do you do one body part per day and how much cardio and how is your cardio structured?

    Meal 2 (post-workout) 7:15am
    Whey Protein Shake in Skim Milk - 32g protein, 14g carbs
    Fat Free Yogurt - 5g protein, 20g carbs
    1/2 cup fat free cottage cheese w/ pineapple - 11g protein, 15g carbs
    Totals: 48g protein, 49g carbs - 400cals
    ****whey shake is ok, maybe eat some hard boiled eggs again (good idea), drop the pineapples, and the yogurt. Eat cottage cheese with some blueberries or some rasberries, pineapples do nothing that I know of.

    Meal 3 - 10:15am
    8oz ground turkey, 48g protein, 16g fat
    Totals: 48g protein, 16g fat - 350cals
    ****ok, but this needs to be closer to pwo meal, add carbs here.

    Meal 4 -1:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    1/2 cup cubed avacado - 10g fat, 6g carbs
    Totals: 48g protein, 10g fat, 300cals (not counting carbs, all fiber)
    ****great meal. try to make it not turkey because I recommend you to eat different sources of protein.


    Meal 5 - 4:15pm
    8oz ground turkey - 48g protein, 16 grams of fat
    Totals: 48g protein, 200cals
    ****left over thanksgiving?

    Meal 6 - 7:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    Fibrous veggies (broccoli, asparagus, etc.) or small salad
    Totals: 48g protein, minimal carbs (mostly fiber), 300cals
    ****good meal, small salad is usually bad, but it can easily be made nutritious.

    Meal 7 (bedtime) 10:00pm
    Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein, 5g carbs
    Totals: 30g protein, 5g carbs, 220 cals
    ****let's make this a profat meal
    look for the **** and revise.

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    5'11
    195lbs
    34 years old
    Not sure about bodyfat %, but an educated guess is somewhere around 20%
    I will be posting pics ASAP
    ****ok sounds good
    Short Term Goal: 200lbs, 10% (or lower) bodyfat
    ****that's going to involve a cut (now) and a bulk (later) I'll do whatever it takes!

    5:45am - 7:15am - Workout and cardio
    ****do you do one body part per day and how much cardio and how is your cardio structured? I do 2 per day - Chest and Tri's Monday/Thursday, Back and Bi's Tuesday/Friday, Legs and Shoulders Wednesday/Friday (only shoulders on Friday) I do 1/2 hour of cardio - typically intervals (2 minutes at a very good pace, 1 minute killing it, 2 minutes paced, and so on) on the elliptical, treadmill, or stairmaster

    ****whey shake is ok, maybe eat some hard boiled eggs again (good idea), drop the pineapples, and the yogurt. Eat cottage cheese with some blueberries or some rasberries, pineapples do nothing that I know of. Yum, more hard boiled eggs! =) As I mentioned in my original post, the yogurt and cottage (with pineapple) is mostly for the small amount of simple carbs PWO. I know you have mixed feelings on the benefits of this

    Meal 3 - 10:15am
    8oz ground turkey, 48g protein, 16g fat
    Totals: 48g protein, 16g fat - 350cals
    ****ok, but this needs to be closer to pwo meal, add carbs here. Not sure what you're saying here? Closer in time of day to the PWO meal, or closer in content? PS - I removed carbs here (oats) based on your previous recommendation

    Meal 4 -1:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    1/2 cup cubed avacado - 10g fat, 6g carbs
    Totals: 48g protein, 10g fat, 300cals (not counting carbs, all fiber)
    ****great meal. try to make it not turkey because I recommend you to eat different sources of protein. Agreed! Most of the time it's fish or chicken

    Meal 5 - 4:15pm
    8oz ground turkey - 48g protein, 16 grams of fat
    Totals: 48g protein, 200cals
    ****left over thanksgiving? LoL not quite - just quick and convenient.

    Meal 6 - 7:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    Fibrous veggies (broccoli, asparagus, etc.) or small salad
    Totals: 48g protein, minimal carbs (mostly fiber), 300cals
    ****good meal, small salad is usually bad, but it can easily be made nutritious. Why would the salad be bad? Usually contains some walnuts, romaine/baby greens, lite vinagarette

    Meal 7 (bedtime) 10:00pm
    Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein, 5g carbs
    Totals: 30g protein, 5g carbs, 220 cals
    ****let's make this a profat meal Really? This right before bed? Protein shake here is ok, right? How about if I add 1/2 cup of avacado?

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    Quote Originally Posted by gbrice75 View Post
    5'11
    195lbs
    34 years old
    Not sure about bodyfat %, but an educated guess is somewhere around 20%
    I will be posting pics ASAP
    ****ok sounds good
    Short Term Goal: 200lbs, 10% (or lower) bodyfat
    ****that's going to involve a cut (now) and a bulk (later) I'll do whatever it takes!

    5:45am - 7:15am - Workout and cardio
    ****do you do one body part per day and how much cardio and how is your cardio structured? I do 2 per day - Chest and Tri's Monday/Thursday, Back and Bi's Tuesday/Friday, Legs and Shoulders Wednesday/Friday (only shoulders on Friday) I do 1/2 hour of cardio - typically intervals (2 minutes at a very good pace, 1 minute killing it, 2 minutes paced, and so on) on the elliptical, treadmill, or stairmaster

    $$$$Shoulders on wed and fri? do cardio for longer, and do stairmaster for the first 20 minutes at least. also you want to have your hr at 85%for about 45sec and then you want your hr at 65%for 2minutes, this doesn't mean that you do 45sec high and 2min slow cuz you have to wait for your hr to drop first. chances are if you do 1min high and then slow for 2min then your hr only dropped to fat burn zone for like 30sec before you went high again.

    ****whey shake is ok, maybe eat some hard boiled eggs again (good idea), drop the pineapples, and the yogurt. Eat cottage cheese with some blueberries or some rasberries, pineapples do nothing that I know of. Yum, more hard boiled eggs! =) As I mentioned in my original post, the yogurt and cottage (with pineapple) is mostly for the small amount of simple carbs PWO. I know you have mixed feelings on the benefits of this

    $$$$Use beneficial berries instead if you want to do that. also did you read my post on "carb intolerance" (idk why they retitled it for me)? if not read that and it should explain why you want to keep your simple carbs out of your diet in a simple way.

    Meal 3 - 10:15am
    8oz ground turkey, 48g protein, 16g fat
    Totals: 48g protein, 16g fat - 350cals
    ****ok, but this needs to be closer to pwo meal, add carbs here. Not sure what you're saying here? Closer in time of day to the PWO meal, or closer in content? PS - I removed carbs here (oats) based on your previous recommendation

    $$$$closer to the time of day. If you want carbs in your diet, I recommend pre workout and post workout. but you have to remember that you want to keep your glycogen levels relatively depleted.

    Meal 4 -1:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    1/2 cup cubed avacado - 10g fat, 6g carbs
    Totals: 48g protein, 10g fat, 300cals (not counting carbs, all fiber)
    ****great meal. try to make it not turkey because I recommend you to eat different sources of protein. Agreed! Most of the time it's fish or chicken

    $$$$ok good

    Meal 5 - 4:15pm
    8oz ground turkey - 48g protein, 16 grams of fat
    Totals: 48g protein, 200cals
    ****left over thanksgiving? LoL not quite - just quick and convenient.

    Meal 6 - 7:15pm
    8oz chicken, beef, turkey, or fish - 48g protein
    Fibrous veggies (broccoli, asparagus, etc.) or small salad
    Totals: 48g protein, minimal carbs (mostly fiber), 300cals
    ****good meal, small salad is usually bad, but it can easily be made nutritious. Why would the salad be bad? Usually contains some walnuts, romaine/baby greens, lite vinagarette

    $$$$in general salads have little to offer because people use the wrong lettuce, unhealthy dressing etc etc. If you are good then you are good.

    Meal 7 (bedtime) 10:00pm
    Premier Protein Shake - 30g protein, 5g carbs
    Totals: 30g protein, 5g carbs, 220 cals
    ****let's make this a profat meal Really? This right before bed? Protein shake here is ok, right? How about if I add 1/2 cup of avacado?

    $$$$why go with shake leaving your body in need of protein within 1.5 hours? you grow and lose when you sleep so make sure it has what it needs when you cannot eat. this is the fundamental basics of diet.
    $$$$seee$$$$

    try to post a new diet because it is getting really hard to read through all of the corrections in each post and Idk what to disregard and what has already been discussed.

    If you want carbs don't make them fast carbs, make them low gi complex carbs. Also I would eat at a little under maintenance and make the 500-700 calorie per day deficit through cardio. I like to do this to keep the muscle mass.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Twist View Post
    $$$$seee$$$$

    try to post a new diet because it is getting really hard to read through all of the corrections in each post and Idk what to disregard and what has already been discussed.

    If you want carbs don't make them fast carbs, make them low gi complex carbs. Also I would eat at a little under maintenance and make the 500-700 calorie per day deficit through cardio. I like to do this to keep the muscle mass.
    Thanks again Twist, i'll go back to the drawing board. After refining and refining, I will get this right one day and find what works for me!

    PS (to all) - I upp'd pics in the 'members pics' forum, please check them out and critique (and don't make me commit suicide )

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    Quote Originally Posted by gbrice75 View Post
    Sorry, I initially posted this as an update to my original post, but figured i'd start over here:

    5'11
    195lbs
    34 years old
    Not sure about bodyfat %, but an educated guess is somewhere around 20%
    I will be posting pics ASAP
    Short Term Goal: 200lbs, 10% (or lower) bodyfat

    Meals 3 and 5 are identical although I forgot to add the fat into meal 5. With 16 grams of fat per 8oz of ground turkey, I saw no need for any additional calories here. What do you think?
    15% bf with 185 lbs is a more realistic short term goal imo.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klimax View Post
    15% bf with 185 lbs is a more realistic short term goal imo.
    As long as bodyfat is decreasing and lean mass is increasing, i'll take anything!

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