Dirtballs first ever training log! please critique

[dirtball_619]

alright so i havent really ever lifted weights or been into sports so im new to this. been working out at a buddys house for the past month. with next weeks paycheck im gonna get a gym membership at a very nice place close by.

one thing id like to include is i go to work at ups doing package handling from 3am till 8 am. this work consists of mainly upper body movements using the shoulders. sometime for irregulars some can be up to 120 lbs that i must lift to eye level on a conveyer. basically intense labor for 5 hours with a 15 minute break in the middle. will this have a negative effect on training such as inproportional shoulders/upper back?ive only worked here for two weeks and all i feel is soreness in biceps and joint pain in my shoulders but should probably get used to it considering the shape of my co-workers.
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stats
5,8"
135-140 lbs(i keep jumping between the two)
age:18
bf- guessing between 16-18%?(look at pic)
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monday-legs

warm up-2 minutes treadmil/stretch
hack squats-2 sets/5 reps
regular squats-2 sets/4 reps
leg press- 3 sets/4 reps

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teusday-chest & tri's
warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
bb press-2 sets/5 reps
db press-2 set/6 reps
incline bench-2 sets/5 reps
decline bench-2 sets/5 reps
skulls- 3 sets/6 reps
behind head dumbell raises-2 sets/6 reps
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wednsday-rest day/yoga


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thursday-back & calves

warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
(gonna reasearch more back excersizes)
upright rows-2 sets/6 reps
(dont know excersize name, you lean on bench with knee and hand, while other leg is on ground and i pull up vertically a dumbell to work out back)

calve raises-3 sets/8 reps

(this day is gonna need some work) suggestions?
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Friday-cardio/yoga

stretch/run 1 mile.

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saturday-shoulders & bi's
(gonna research more shoulder excersizes)
front military press-2 sets/6 reps
back military press-2 sets/6 reps
db military press- 2 sets/6 reps
bb curls-3 sets/6 reps
db curls-3 sets/6 reps
preacher curls-2 sets/4 reps


notice how im doing low rep/high weight excersizes, with some cardio. this is because i will be ingesting rediculous amounts of steak/eggs/potatoes/fish/pasta/veggies. mega dosing bcaa's, and 3 prolab nlarge2 shakes a day. im looking for quality mass and strength gains and not necessarilly to much into tone or definition.

i know this is going to need a lot of work so i would greatly appreciate any input! please! thank you in advanced, yours truly -dirtball


and the pic, (been posted before in members pic forum)

[dirtball_619]

bump

[audis4]

your BF estimation is far off....I'd say more like 12%

@ 135-140 you better throw up a diet to be critiqued and start bulking!!

Looks as though you may be overtraining on some of those days.

Check out narks/chest's/uber's/my workout journal to get a feel and post your diet in the diet section.

Good luck bro

[MotoLifter]

Deadlifts should be on back day, so should lats.

I personaly switch traps between back and sholder day every week.

That workout you posted is alittle advanced for a beginner. Stick with the three major lifts (bench, squat, deadlift) as the base for your routine. With some assistance movements incorperated on corresponding days. Compound movements will alow you to pack on the most skeletal muscle (base muscle).

stay away from shaping exercises for now ie: concentration curls, etc.

Your diet is going to be the biggest factor here. Get it on point.
check the diet forum. Good luck.

[MFT81]

I agree with MOTO...

Your overlaping alot by doing legs one day then wanting to do Deadlift the next for back (I KNOW you have DL on leg day but you will probably change to doing it for back.)

Plus you do arms after chest and shoulders after chest which is going to tear up your shoulders.

HOWEVER I do like that you seem to want to lift with less sets and heavy weight and you will do the basic three lifts as well.

also your only training 4 days a week which is what I do. so you have a good base.

Here is what I recomend.

MON: LEGS
Tues: Chest and Tris
Wens: Off
Thurs: Back/Calves
Fri: Off or cardo/yoga
Sat: Shoulders and bis

[MFT81]

also dont make the same mistake when I first started bulking by eating a ton of shit and not doing cardio.

Getting winded tying your shoes is not healthy.

[dirtball_619]

ok so i just updated the first post, please tell me what ya think. what day should i add in traps and lats?

[MFT81]

monday-legs

warm up-2 minutes treadmil/stretch
hack squats-2 sets/5 reps
regular squats-2 sets/4 reps
leg press- 3 sets/4 reps

Need one or two things for Hams like leg curls or Stiff Leg Deads
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teusday-chest & tri's
warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
bb press-2 sets/5 reps
db press-2 set/6 reps
No need for both do one or other
incline bench-2 sets/5 reps
decline bench-2 sets/5 reps
Get rid of decline for now or exchange for dips
skulls- 3 sets/6 reps
behind head dumbell raises-2 sets/6 reps
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wednsday-rest day/yoga


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thursday-back & calves

warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
(gonna reasearch more back excersizes)
upright rows-2 sets/6 reps
(dont know excersize name, you lean on bench with knee and hand, while other leg is on ground and i pull up vertically a dumbell to work out back)

calve raises-3 sets/8 reps

(this day is gonna need some work) suggestions?
Back
1. Deadlift
2. Barbell Row.
3. Cable row
4. Pullups
5. CG Pulldowns
Calves
1. Seated raises
2. Standing raises
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Friday-cardio/yoga

stretch/run 1 mile.

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saturday-shoulders & bi's
(gonna research more shoulder excersizes)
front military press-2 sets/6 reps
back military press-2 sets/6 reps
db military press- 2 sets/6 reps
No need to do all three presses pick one to start then do like lateral raises with rear delt raises or upright rows with rear delt. also no need to do front delt raises cause these will progress with your bench work with chest
bb curls-3 sets/6 reps
db curls-3 sets/6 reps
preacher curls-2 sets/4 reps

Check out ABCbodybuilding.com I think for a million differnt ideas for every body part with a short example of how to do each one.

[MFT81]

here is an alternate split.....

Mon: Quads and Calves
Tues: Shoulders, Bis, and abs
Wens: Off/ Cardio-yoga
Thurs: Back, Hams,
Fri:Off
Sat: Chest, Tris, Calves

[S.P.G]

monday-legs

warm up-2 minutes treadmil/stretch
hack squats-2 sets/5 reps
regular squats-2 sets/4 reps
leg press- 3 sets/4 reps

Need one or two things for Hams like leg curls or Stiff Leg Deads
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teusday-chest & tri's
warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
bb press-2 sets/5 reps
db press-2 set/6 reps
No need for both do one or other
incline bench-2 sets/5 reps
decline bench-2 sets/5 reps
Get rid of decline for now or exchange for dips
skulls- 3 sets/6 reps
behind head dumbell raises-2 sets/6 reps
--------------------------------------------
wednsday-rest day/yoga


----------------------------
thursday-back & calves

warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
(gonna reasearch more back excersizes)
upright rows-2 sets/6 reps
(dont know excersize name, you lean on bench with knee and hand, while other leg is on ground and i pull up vertically a dumbell to work out back)

calve raises-3 sets/8 reps

(this day is gonna need some work) suggestions?
Back
1. Deadlift
2. Barbell Row.
3. Cable row
4. Pullups
5. CG Pulldowns
Calves
1. Seated raises
2. Standing raises
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Friday-cardio/yoga

stretch/run 1 mile.

------------------------------
saturday-shoulders & bi's
(gonna research more shoulder excersizes)
front military press-2 sets/6 reps
back military press-2 sets/6 reps
db military press- 2 sets/6 reps
No need to do all three presses pick one to start then do like lateral raises with rear delt raises or upright rows with rear delt. also no need to do front delt raises cause these will progress with your bench work with chest
bb curls-3 sets/6 reps
db curls-3 sets/6 reps
preacher curls-2 sets/4 reps

Check out ABCbodybuilding.com I think for a million differnt ideas for every body part with a short example of how to do each one.

looks good to me dude! personally I like to work in the 6-12 rep range...

[MotoLifter]

monday-legs

warm up-2 minutes treadmil/stretch
hack squats-2 sets/5 reps
regular squats-2 sets/4 reps
leg press- 3 sets/4 reps

Need one or two things for Hams like leg curls or Stiff Leg Deads
------------------------------------------
teusday-chest & tri's
warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
bb press-2 sets/5 reps
db press-2 set/6 reps
No need for both do one or other
incline bench-2 sets/5 reps
decline bench-2 sets/5 reps
Get rid of decline for now or exchange for dips
skulls- 3 sets/6 reps
behind head dumbell raises-2 sets/6 reps
--------------------------------------------
wednsday-rest day/yoga


----------------------------
thursday-back & calves

warm up-5 minutes treadmil/stretch
(gonna reasearch more back excersizes)
upright rows-2 sets/6 reps
(dont know excersize name, you lean on bench with knee and hand, while other leg is on ground and i pull up vertically a dumbell to work out back)

calve raises-3 sets/8 reps

(this day is gonna need some work) suggestions?
Back
1. Deadlift
2. Barbell Row.
3. Cable row
4. Pullups
5. CG Pulldowns
Calves
1. Seated raises
2. Standing raises
------------------------------
Friday-cardio/yoga

stretch/run 1 mile.

------------------------------
saturday-shoulders & bi's
(gonna research more shoulder excersizes)
front military press-2 sets/6 reps
back military press-2 sets/6 reps
db military press- 2 sets/6 reps
No need to do all three presses pick one to start then do like lateral raises with rear delt raises or upright rows with rear delt. also no need to do front delt raises cause these will progress with your bench work with chest
bb curls-3 sets/6 reps
db curls-3 sets/6 reps
preacher curls-2 sets/4 reps

Check out ABCbodybuilding.com I think for a million differnt ideas for every body part with a short example of how to do each one.

I like this split. the only thing that concerns me is the amout of exercises per muscle group. You could end up overtraining. But somthing like that is very individual specific. just payattention to what your body is telling you, It can be difficult at first but you'll learn how to interpret signals from yout body. do some reading on overtraining for mor info.

www.abcbodybuilding.com/exercise1 is the page MTF was directing you to. Good stuff there.

[dirtball_619]

thanks guys ill do alittle reading and hit you guys back with what i got