to be honest Sarge i'd cut that down to 3 sets each. shoulder is a small muscle group, and hey don't need that much training. you'll be surprised how they'll respond. i don't know how old you are but at my age (56) i find it best when i rest at least a week before i hit the muscle group again.
i do 65-70 degree incline bench press, and alternate with dumbbells (one week bench press, one week dumbbells), try to position your elbows in a little.
Rear delt cables are awesome. and of course front raises side lateral, etc...
finally grab 25 # plate (or whatever weight you're comfortable with) and do this,
forward to 1:40
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LEcqR-VQRKM
good luck.