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    6 weeks out - please critique

    I am 6 weeks out from my competition and weigh 94kg (206lbs) with height 175cm (5'9"). I know I still look like crap, but I plan to come in at about 88-89kg.

    Any and all comments and suggestions welcome. Please see photos below.

    Thank you
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    I personally think you look great, no homo..... but what type of competition are you doing and how tall are you?

    Speed.

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    Your conditioning looks great but you need to work on your mandatories.
    Front Double Bi-Spead your lats more, you are concentrating too much on your abs and it's making you appear narrow.
    Ab/Thigh- Tuck your elbows in and get rid of that gap, they should be pointing forward right next to your head.
    Back Double Bi-You need to open it up further and rotate your arms backwards alot further, remember the judges are below stage level.

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    Quote Originally Posted by speedtraining View Post
    I personally think you look great, no homo..... but what type of competition are you doing and how tall are you?

    Thanks, 175cm.

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    Quote Originally Posted by FireGuy1 View Post
    Your conditioning looks great but you need to work on your mandatories.
    Front Double Bi-Spead your lats more, you are concentrating too much on your abs and it's making you appear narrow.
    Ab/Thigh- Tuck your elbows in and get rid of that gap, they should be pointing forward right next to your head.
    Back Double Bi-You need to open it up further and rotate your arms backwards alot further, remember the judges are below stage level.
    You're exactly right, and that's what he needs to hear. He will do it, and he truly appreciates it. Thanks

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    wow man,impressive. in 6 weeks you should look sick(in a good way)

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    Quote Originally Posted by ghettoboyd View Post
    wow man,impressive. in 6 weeks you should look sick(in a good way)
    Thanks. Will give it the best try possible.

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    Quote Originally Posted by FireGuy1 View Post
    Your conditioning looks great but you need to work on your mandatories.
    Front Double Bi-Spead your lats more, you are concentrating too much on your abs and it's making you appear narrow.
    Ab/Thigh- Tuck your elbows in and get rid of that gap, they should be pointing forward right next to your head.
    Back Double Bi-You need to open it up further and rotate your arms backwards alot further, remember the judges are below stage level.

    BINGO! Nothing else need IMO...the only thing that stood out was your poses.
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    Quote Originally Posted by muriloninja View Post
    BINGO! Nothing else need IMO...the only thing that stood out was your poses.
    I have a posing coach who will work with me on weekends.

    I really do appreciate the input.

    Thanks

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    Condition is good.

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    Work on bringing up your back and posing.

    Lookin good otherwise.

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    Also agree on the posing and the back area.

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    Quote Originally Posted by *Narkissos* View Post
    Condition is good.

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    Thank you, I know I can trust you.

    Quote Originally Posted by bbuilder View Post
    Work on bringing up your back and posing.

    Lookin good otherwise.
    Thanks, consider it done.

    Quote Originally Posted by jackjackson View Post
    Also agree on the posing and the back area.
    Will do.

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    you look like this dude i know at my gym. same posing style everything lol, cept the dude at my gym is natty, a lil smaller but yea.

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