Critique my first cycle

[Back In Black]

You gained 70lbs of LBM naturally in 3 years with inconsistent diet? Just imagine what you could do naturally with a good consistent diet in only 6 months without the potential health implications.

[branvan]

You gained 70lbs of LBM naturally in 3 years with inconsistent diet? Just imagine what you could do naturally with a good consistent diet in only 6 months without the potential health implications.

Thanks everyone for input. I've decided to keep the natty dream alive then