Pretty good news

**zimmy** · 06-01-2006, 02:45 AM

So i checked the mail a few ago (yah it's late but i was bored...) anyway.. I got a poem published in a small collecting of poetry. No they aren't paying me sh*t, but it's cool, i haven't let anybody read anything of mine since high school. I've been published before, but I had my high school english teacher submitt my work so I didn't have to do anything. This is the first time I went out of my way

Just thought i'd share

**WEBB** · 06-01-2006, 05:17 AM

nice work man...congrats....if you wanna post it i would like to read it....doesnt matter thay didnt pay ya, the recognition is nice...

**lucabratzi** · 06-01-2006, 07:12 AM

thats cool bro..i'd like to read it too..if u feel like posting any...

**mwolffey** · 06-01-2006, 08:12 AM

good job bro...post it if you get a chance

**zimmy** · 06-01-2006, 10:43 AM

well...until it gets published and gets copyright protection... aint postin it on a searchable forum from the internet :P. Mebe i'll post up some of my old published stuff that's already copyrighted. Not trying to say anyone one here would steal it, but i've been burnt on that before.

**mwolffey** · 06-01-2006, 01:58 PM

good call

**zimmy** · 06-04-2006, 01:10 AM

yo... i was bored so i sent you guys (who asked) a copy of it. Not great, but luckily...you don't need to be good to get acknowledged :P

**lucabratzi** · 06-04-2006, 02:08 AM

Originally Posted by zimmy

yo... i was bored so i sent you guys (who asked) a copy of it. Not great, but luckily...you don't need to be good to get acknowledged :P

shit was real good...pm sent...

**zimmy** · 06-04-2006, 03:31 AM

Eh.. still up ... still bored...first poem ever published back in my freshman year :P

Eclipes

The light copies pain,
and slowly uplifts.
The light lets the dark creep
across the already gloomy sky.
The rhythm of night and day slowly
skips a painless beat.

No warning is foretold
to the naked human eye.
Pain slowly dissapates,
leaving a wave of peace.

Not a baby cries,
nor does it's mother.
Not a bank alarm rings,
and neither does the clock of crime.

This is a moment of magic,
for this is a moment of peace.

Copyrighted @1996.