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    Wink Poem Thread

    Don't know if any of you guys like poetry I like to write in my spare time.
    If you do too lets see what you got

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    Now I lay me down to sleep

    I pray to God I do not wake

    My life has been a big mistake

    I want to die it is my choice

    Perhaps in death I will rejoice




    Pain and sorrow is all I know

    Day by day it continues to grow

    Friends and family are not around

    Which is why I wish to be in the ground

    You told me you loved me which was a lie

    Which is now why I must die




    I now say my good by to you

    I wish you good through and through

    I hope you have a happy life

    Oh P.S sorry I ****ed your wife

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    Write a poem about tren ace

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skinticket
    Now I lay me down to sleep I pray to God I do not wake My life has been a big mistake I want to die it is my choice Perhaps in death I will rejoice Pain and sorrow is all I know Day by day it continues to grow Friends and family are not around Which is why I wish to be in the ground You told me you loved me which was a lie Which is now why I must die I now say my good by to you I wish you good through and through I hope you have a happy life Oh P.S sorry I ****ed your wife
    That's depressing. Maybe something more upbeat, inspirational.

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    Haha, I've never taken tren but I will do my best

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    here is a video I made a while back
    https://youtu.be/v3Mnix6AKKo

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    okay GirlyGymRat I will work on something for you.

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    My mind is a twisted orb of thoughts and memories..

    Hurt pain sorrow despair

    My love, you give me your word

    but yet choose another path

    and I again parish within the dust




    I am now just a broken soul

    searching for what has meaning

    but the fight is nearing the end

    all love has gone, only hate remains




    shall I choose hate and remain

    or love and have ever lasting peace..

    I now lay down thy sword and thy armor

    enough blood has been swept across this land.




    Let the dead return from which they came,

    and the angels regain their wings,

    and the lost souls find their way

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    Roses are a flower
    Violets are too
    I suck at poetry
    Nice Tits!
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    Quote Originally Posted by RigPig View Post
    Roses are a flower
    Violets are too
    I suck at poetry
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    Art Critic Hoggage says.... A masterpiece of art right here.

    The roses and violets represent repressed emotions.

    The lack of structure to the poem are a reflection of the time this poem was written, a time when more and more people lacked these in their lives.

    The artist is clearly suffering from depression, an unfortunate illness caused by his incredible genius, when he wrote the words "I suck at poetry".

    The reference to female breasts represents his unconscious lust for his own mother.

    If you do not understand what I mean by all of this, or disagree of my assessment of the artist, it's because you do not understand what true art is.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hoggage_54
    Art Critic Hoggage says.... A masterpiece of art right here. The roses and violets represent repressed emotions. The lack of structure to the poem are a reflection of the time this poem was written, a time when more and more people lacked these in their lives. The artist is clearly suffering from depression, an unfortunate illness caused by his incredible genius, when he wrote the words "I suck at poetry". The reference to female breasts represents his unconscious lust for his own mother. If you do not understand what I mean by all of this, or disagree of my assessment of the artist, it's because you do not understand what true art is.
    Finally someone that gets me lol... My work here is done hahaha

    **except the mother part...That's f**ked up lol
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